The Tunnel Writing

For writing with our reliever we did some narrative writing, so she read a book called the tunnel and that is when 2 siblings dislike each other and they act like they are strangers. Until one day there mother told them both to go outside and spend time together then they both went to the junk yard and the boy found a tunnel he went inside and his sister was to scared to go through the tunnel until she didn't have any sign of here brother. Our teacher stopped it their and we had to make a ending from the story so my ending was a beautiful waterfall fairy area that she went in and her brother was swimming in the lake she went to go and pick a flower until she saw a fairy cottage she went inside and their were a lot of books now often the brother goes their to swim and his sister goes their to read and that was the ending I ended my story with.